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I agree with Eleanor too. Anyways, in my opinion it ended kind of fast and that the end was too brief. My favorite part though was: Once it was injected ...

I liked it and agree that it is a very honest poem. This was my favorite part:For so long I have been trapped in the carnival of unhappy endings, riding ...

I loved it! Honestly i really did. I'm not very good at critting poetry but I'll try my best. My favorite part was: your name is always in my mind, ...

I like it. Um I'm not too good at critting poetry either crysi so don't feel bad...I'm going to do the best i can. This part right here didn't seem ...

I loved it!!! :D I enjoyed reading it as much as I did the other one. I hope there will be more to read after this one. Good job and ...

I'm surprised that it wasn't about shaving or something. LOL! j/k. Um I like it but it's missing punctuation and stuff like that. Soel should be soul. In my opinion ...

Loved it!!! I like the way it started and ended. Only problems I saw were typos and spelling and punchuation errors. I hope there's more to read. My favorite part ...

Loved it!! My jaw is locked in three places and I know he broke a few of my ribs when he left, because I can still feel that rush of ...

Really good job! I enjoyed reading it. She sat in Steph's room and we stood around her and they asked her if she was cold and alright and did she ...

I really liked it and thought it was interesting. I enjoy writing about vampires myself and am trying to get one started. I agree with sam cuz it kind of ...

Good job. I really enjoyed reading this. I'm glad you posted it. My life isn't anywhere close to what Lanie's is but it feels like I can find myself in ...

I read some of it on RK like a long time ago. I really enjoyed reading it and like Bobo said it is awesome. I think that you described it ...

Yeah I'm wondering the same things as Crysi. I didn't expect what I just read. It was written well, I can say that much, but I can't say whether I ...

I liked it a lot. I think this is the first poem of yours that I have read and really enjoyed it. I can relate to it b/c it's as ...

Good job. The main things that I saw in the error subject is that you didn't capitalize the first word. The screaming of the kids that thought it was so ...